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Take this  basketball and go shoot

a shot, just one—one shot only, any

where on the court, don’t matter
where.

Good. Now come here and sit in the
bleachers and we’ll all of us critique,

workshop, advise, recommend maybe

rate and assess so you can learn from

your errors.

Now:  do it again. Take this ball and

shoot it . ONE SHOT only.  Anywhere

on the court.  Bingo.

There, now come on over & sit right

down. We’re going to  critique, work

shop,  advise,  recommend maybe

rate and  assess so you can  learn

from your mistakes.

Now: do it again. Shoot this ball

anywhere you want on the court

but only one shot: just one. Attagirl.

There: sit with us and we’ll comment,

critique, workshop, advise and

recommend maybe rate and assess

so you can learn from your solecisms.

Now: Shoot it baby one more time
once again just once anywhere on
the court you like. Once only. Only
once.

Come on over here and sit with us and

we’ll comment, critique, workshop,  advise

and  recommend maybe rate and assess so

you can learn from your trials and errors

and all these rooms for play.